Take your foot off the brakes, but keep your eyes on the road
~Fitz
Once, back in my days as a logger, I cut through a big white oak. I didn’t realize that the trunk was mostly rotten and hollow until my chain saw was most of the way through the monstrous tree. After the mad crush of the tree to the ground I noticed blood on my saw and on my legs. In cutting the tree down, I inadvertently massacred a whole raccoon family: a mom and seven incredibly small babies. I was pretty bummed about it all, but while moving the family out of the stump, I noticed the smallest ball of fur hobbling way on three legs.
One had survived. I picked him up and named him Rocky (after the main character in The Beatles big hit “Rocky Raccoon.” He fit into my shirt pocket with plenty of room to spare.
When I got home, I put him on the table in a cake dish filled with straw. I wasn’t even sure how to feed it. Its eyes were still closed. I heated up some milk in a pan on the stove and sucked some warm milk into an eye-dropper, and as luck would have it, Rocky slurped it up.
For the first few weeks warm milk was all Rocky could eat, but as time went on he grew into a fun little terror who would eat almost anything. He even learned to open the refrigerator door himself. He laid on his back in the mornings when I was milking my goats begging for me to squeeze the teats milk all over his face. He would steal the chickens’ eggs as if it were his birthright.
I felt like a young dad doing everything a dad needed to do. I wanted to raise a raccoon that could live in both worlds: the wild world and my world. After about six months Rocky was a pretty stout and healthy three-legged raccoon. I felt more and more confident that he could now live in both a feral and a wild world.
So I let Rocky outside on his own.
Later I saw a hawk circling overhead the hay field. I saw a coydog skulking in the tangle of brush beside the woods. I heard the awful cry of a fisher cat somewhere deep in the swamp.
Maybe I let Rocky go too soon. Maybe I should have given him a better rubric for life.
But that is no way to live…
Do you really need a rubric for this assignment?
Interesting. I think this is a metaphor for how nobody can tell you how to live your life. Your life, your hands.
This was an amazing story! “But that is no way to live…” all of these lines makes everything fit perfectly. Every goes together so well! Awesome.
Everything*
Like Matthew said, this is a very good metaphor. There isn’t really a rubric to life. I’m wondering, shouldn’t you have looked inside the tree before cutting? Great post! 🙂
Great metaphor. I personally like it when I don’t have a rubric. I feel more free and creative.
Nice metaphor! I was ad in the beginning when you told about killing the raccoons. The only problem is, without having a rubric, how do you know you included everything?
This is an interesting metaphor, Fitz.
I am also sorry about the raccoons Fitz, but I also liked the messages your story carried.
Good and powerful story. Life dosent have a rubric so I agree with you in how we dont need a rubric.
That is quite the story. I must say I disagree with your decision to let Rocky go…
Great story I really liked the metaphor. I also disagree with your decision to let Rocky go, but I cant tell you what to do. Great story.
This is a great story and a good metaphore. I wonder if Rokey is alive…
I really like the metaphor in your story. I don’t think you let Rocky out too soon because from what you wrote I gathered that he was capable of handling himself. Great piece.
Does anyone get that Rocky is a metaphor for you guys in my class tackling the assignment without a rubric?
A great story and a great metaphor
That’s an amazing story. I would’ve felt so awful if I killed a family of raccoons 🙁 that was an amazing last line.
Really cool story. Great metaphor, and like Gray, I love your last sentence.
This is a really cool story Fitz, I get the metaphor that you are trying to express.
Great way to finish it clean, and an interesting metaphor.
Wow this is great writing, I love the little twist at the end.
After re-reading this it was really fun to read
I like your vivid detail setting the scene
Suasponte, as they say